At this point I've finished the first draft of Chapter One going on to begin Chapter Two. This tutorial focused mainly on the upcoming practical crit for COP and how I could make the most of it.
Chapter Three is about analysing supermarkets own-range packaging. In terms on content I had questions I needed to ask myself, that brought up with Amber.
Chapter Three is about analysing supermarkets own-range packaging. In terms on content I had questions I needed to ask myself, that brought up with Amber.
- Point out the difference between the packaging
- What is it I'm trying to prove?
- What do I want to bring to light?
Tutor's Comments
- Good initial breadth allowing for more focus and progress.
- me-too' brands
- Fill out a brief template for practical crit on the 10th
I was told that to keep an eye on the synthesis element, when thinking of practical ideas and that also have is directly be informed by what I'm writing. Think about the format of the practical element.
I also got feedback on Chapter One. I was told I had good references and I looked at brand architecture relevantly, in a way that related to the topic.
I also got feedback on Chapter One. I was told I had good references and I looked at brand architecture relevantly, in a way that related to the topic.
